I feel a little embarrassed for hearing this conversation but they speak very loud.
Their talk never leaves vitamin complexes, crunches series, proteins and carbohydrates but slowly gets warmer. Some laughter appear. It's never been frozen but the temperature is definitely rising. Of course without dropping fat indexes and anaerobic exercises. Suddenly, they stand up and leave the bar. He puts his hand on her waist to cross the street as if he wanted to protect her. Only a few seconds, then he removes it.
I think they're on their forties and far from feeling like beating around the bush.
If I'd had watched this scene in a movie I'd had thought the screenwriter was a genius. First date: from hello to my-house-or-your-house in 20 minutes just talking about carbs.
I finish my drawing and feel that they helped me so much to do it.
And to feel this good.
(And again Joni Mitchell coming to my mind while blogging).







13 comments:
This is such a good post! The artwork is wonderful and so it the story! I think you should write a book of these stories and drawings!
Your story adds so much to what is already a rich drawing- I love it- yes, write more!
I agree with Melanie. Write more!! The picture I have of the couple is as well drawn as the street.
Great drawing, love the story, wonderful post!
Un buen dibujo acompañando una historia divertida, qué más se puede pedir?
Maybe talking about 'carbs' is a common language for singles 'first meet.' Who knows but your sketch is lovely
Great story and drawing!
The drawing is lean and sparkling - like the characters in your narrative. The discipline to not paint everything gives this sketch great depth of field.
What caught my initial attention was your great sketch, but what a great story too!
I saw the fantastic sketch wow!!...Then I read your post..everyone is like that here I reckon. The story compliments the illustration well...or is it vise versa?
Beautiful and elegant drawing, and the best ever "things overheard while sketching" story!
Bonito dibujo. La composición está muy lograda y la historia, ni digamos. Imaginación no te falta.
Thank you so so much everybody, you're so kind (you must be to forgive my english :)
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